- When characters wear shoes inside. (Bringing in dirt from outside makes me cringe.)
- When characters “tuck” into their food.
- When men have “chiseled” features.
- When something is overly descriptive or flowery.
- When there are off-season flowers.
xoxo, Jane
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Verbose descriptions can ruin a book for me!
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Me too. Overkill.
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